How To Write Scenes: The Anatomy of Scene Structure

Scene structure? Think of it as the backbone of your screenplay – except it's more fun than biology class and less likely to put you to sleep. Or like carrying a tray of drinks in a crowded bar. One false move and it's an awkward mess. In the screenwriting world there are very few perfect scenes, and even those are hotly debated. So, where do you get started on learning how to write scenes?

Today, we’re going to look at the most essential component of a script, venturing into what constitutes a strong, healthy scene versus a poor, sickly one.

What is a Scene?

Imagine a scene as the backbone of your story's skeleton. Each one is a crucial vertebra in the spine of your film or TV series.

Scene writing involves a mix of creativity and strategy. You have to decide the purpose of each scene. Is it introducing your story, revealing important information, or setting up future events? Every scene has its role, like a member of a band, each playing their part in the harmony of your story.

In simple terms, a scene is a sequence of continuous action. But for those of us who love movies and storytelling, it’s much more. It's an opportunity to engage, excite, and connect with your audience. Each scene should add something meaningful to your story, whether it’s drama, humor, or suspense. Ready to start crafting scenes that resonate and entertain? Let’s begin.

How Do You Write a Great Scene?

A great scene is like a memorable moment in life – it has a clear start, an engaging middle, and a definitive end. What really sets a great scene apart, however, is how it connects with the scenes before and after it, much like how each piece of a jigsaw puzzle is interconnected to the piece before it and after it. 

HBO’s The Wire (2002)

At the start of a scene, you need to lay the groundwork. Set the stage with a vivid setting, introduce your characters, and establish their relationships and dynamics. This is your chance to hook your audience right from the get-go.

The heart of most standout scenes is conflict or tension. It's not just about two characters disagreeing or facing a challenge; it’s about creating a situation that pushes the story forward. Conflict and tension are the engines driving your plot, and a well-written scene uses these elements to build momentum.

As for the end of a scene, think of it as a promise of what's to come. It should do more than just wrap up what just happened; it should set the stage for what follows. Whether it’s a subtle hint or a dramatic cliffhanger, the end of a scene should leave your audience craving more.

Let's dive deeper into these components and see how they work together to create a scene that not only stands out but also elevates your entire script.

1. Establish a Clear Setting

It's essential to choose the right location for your scene. Every setting is a canvas where your story unfolds. It's not just about the 'where' but also the 'why' and 'how' this place impacts the events. The setting shapes the mood, context, and pacing of your scene. 

Wong Kar Wai’s In the Mood for Love (2000)

If you're penning a crime noir, for instance, opt for settings that scream suspense and mystery, like a dimly lit alley or a rain-slicked street. Avoid throwing in a random location that doesn't mesh with your story's tone – like a sunny, bustling beach in the middle of a tense thriller, unless it serves a purpose in your plot. The right setting doesn't just paint a picture; it sets the stage for your narrative ballet.

2. Choose the Right POV: Character Focus and Journey

Selecting the character's point of view (POV) is crucial for each scene. Typically, scenes revolve around your main character, simplifying the process of revealing motivations and driving the plot. However, don't shy away from switching perspectives. Viewing a scene through the eyes of a secondary character, or even using a third-person viewpoint, can add depth and new angles to your protagonist's journey.

Tom Ford’s Nocturnal Animals (2016)

It's vital to define clear goals for your characters, not just in the grand scheme of your story but in each scene. These goals should propel the narrative forward. For example, if your hero's ultimate aim is to overthrow a dystopian regime, a scene might focus on them recruiting an ally, thereby inching closer to their overarching objective. Remember, whether it’s advancing the plot or deepening character development, a scene must always serve a purpose.

Challenge your characters. Create scenes where they grapple with emotional, ethical, or physical dilemmas. A smooth-sailing journey isn’t nearly as engaging as one filled with conflict and growth. By placing your characters in testing situations, you enrich the story and keep your audience invested.

 3. Fuel the Fire: Crafting Conflict and Tension

Conflict and tension are the lifeblood of a compelling scene. They're what keep viewers on the edge of their seats, eager to see what happens next. Without these elements, a scene can quickly become a flat, exposition-heavy narrative that loses its grip on the audience.

Consider our hypothetical screenplay. Imagine a scene where our hero seeks assistance from a colleague. If the help is readily given, where's the tension? Now, let's add some spice: the colleague, the only one who can aid our hero, decides to retire. Or, they agree to help, but only if the hero does something against their moral compass. Suddenly, the stakes are raised, and we're drawn into the hero's internal struggle. This isn’t just about moving the plot forward; it's about deepening our understanding of the characters.

Take, for instance, this scene in Blade Runner 2049. Agent K's mission is to retire Sapper, a fellow replicant. The tension is apparent – Sapper doesn't want to die, but there's more beneath the surface.

The real twist comes when Sapper questions K’s morality, highlighting the ethical quandaries of his actions. It’s this layering of conflict that transforms a simple action sequence into a thought-provoking moment, brimming with moral complexity.

4. Plot Relevance: Every Scene Must Matter

In screenwriting, every scene should be a meaningful step in your story's journey. Think of each scene as a pivotal moment that transforms your characters in some way. These changes can range from subtle shifts in their mindset to dramatic turns that redefine their goals and desires.

A practical method to test a scene's significance is to imagine the script without it. Does the absence of this scene leave the plot or character development unaffected? If yes, then it’s likely fat, as we say. So cut it! 

Martin Scorsese’s Taxi Driver (1976)

Your goal is to craft scenes that are indispensable, each one adding a layer to the characters' arcs and propelling the narrative forward.

Every scene should contribute something essential. Whether it's revealing a character's hidden motives, introducing a key piece of information, or escalating the tension, its role in the overall story should be clear and impactful. This approach ensures that your screenplay remains tight, engaging, and purposeful.

5. Master Rhythm: Pacing Your Scenes

Pacing is essential in keeping your audience engaged. It's about the rhythm of your story, the heartbeat that keeps viewers hooked. Your audience, whether they realize it or not, is attuned to the pacing of a film. A scene that doesn’t advance the plot or develop characters can feel like you are back in high school biochem, time and plot just slow to a dead stop.

To maintain a good pace, it's crucial to balance action with exposition. If your script has been meandering through a series of low-conflict scenes, shake things up. Inject a burst of energy with a scene full of tension or set in a dynamic new location. This pattern is a staple in storytelling for a reason – it keeps the audience from getting restless.

Quentin Tarantino’s Pulp Fiction (1994)

When crafting a scene, think of it as entering a conversation. You want to arrive late enough to skip the pleasantries but early enough to catch the crux of the discussion. Similarly, exit the scene as soon as its purpose is served. This approach keeps the narrative tight and the pace brisk, ensuring that each scene feels essential and vibrant.

6. Master the Art of Subtle Exposition

In screenwriting, one of the trickiest feats is to convey essential information without falling into the dreaded trap of 'exposition dumps'. These are those hefty chunks of dialogue or monologue where characters unload crucial (or sometimes, not-so-crucial) plot details, often halting the story's natural flow. This is typically where backstory or world-building details are revealed, or previous plot points are expanded upon.

The key to effective exposition is subtlety and the art of implication. It's about showing, not telling. Think about what can be communicated through a character's actions, the setting, or the situation, rather than through direct statements. The goal is to weave vital information into the narrative seamlessly, without making your audience feel like they're sitting through a lecture.

For a classic example of exposition done right, let's look at this scene from Jurassic Park. The film uses an infomercial-style video to introduce the audience to the science behind the park. This clever technique not only provides necessary background information but does so in an engaging, dynamic way that feels natural to the storyline. The characters in the scene watch and react to the video alongside the audience, making the exposition a shared experience rather than a one-sided info-dump.

Adopting this approach not only aids in maintaining a steady narrative pace but also engages your audience on a deeper level. It invites them to piece together the story, offering a sense of satisfaction as they pick up on and interpret these subtle cues.

7. The Art of Foreshadowing

Foreshadowing in screenwriting is akin to Alfred Hitchcock's famous bomb-under-the-table scenario – it's about planting hints that will explode with significance in later scenes, enriching your story with anticipation and depth. This technique involves subtly suggesting future developments, weaving elements into the narrative that will unveil their true meaning as the plot progresses.

By striking this balance, you engage your audience in a game of anticipation and revelation. Whether it’s a pivotal plot twist or a seemingly minor detail, effective foreshadowing keeps viewers hooked, encouraging them to look for clues and piece together future events.

For instance, introducing a character who immediately raises your protagonist’s suspicions can pave the way for a later twist in their role. Take "The Shawshank Redemption" as a classic example. Andy Dufresne’s talk of Mexico, initially dismissed as a fantasy, gains immense significance with his eventual escape through a sewage pipe – turning the ‘pipe dream’ into a literal and metaphorical journey to freedom.

Frank Darabont’s The Shawshank Redemption (1994)

In your scenes, think of foreshadowing as your chance to lay out a trail of breadcrumbs, leading your audience through the twists and turns of your story. It’s a nuanced tool that, when used skillfully, adds layers of complexity and engagement to your screenplay.

8. Craft Dialogue That Resonates

Dialogue is the heartbeat of your characters, vital in scenes brimming with conflict. It's where your characters' personalities, quirks, and backgrounds come alive. Think of dialogue as the unique voice of your characters – no two should sound exactly alike. Avoid creating characters who deliver lines like emotionless robots. Instead, infuse them with distinctive traits, be it a quirky turn of phrase, a notable accent, or a memorable way of speaking.

Tailor your dialogue to fit the genre you're writing. In a down-to-earth drama, your characters should speak in a way that echoes real-life conversations – words that resonate with authenticity. On the flip side, if you're scripting a world more stylized or fantastical, don't shy away from dialogue that's larger than life. Consider this scene from the Grand Budapest Hotel.

The characters' ornate and whimsical speech perfectly complements the film's surreal aesthetic. Imagine, for a moment, transplanting Monsieur Gustave into the gritty, somber world of "The Godfather" – it would be a glaring mismatch.

Strive for dialogue so distinct that your audience can attribute lines to characters without needing tags. Each character should have a voice so clear and defined that it stands out, adding depth and color to the scene. Remember, great dialogue not only drives the plot forward but also reveals the souls of your characters, making them memorable and real in the minds of your audience.

9. Maintain Tone and Mood Consistency

The tone and mood of your scenes should be consistent, much like the overall feel of a well-curated art exhibition. If your script is predominantly a comedy, throwing in a sudden, intense horror scene might jolt your audience uncomfortably. Similarly, inserting a slapstick comedy bit into an otherwise serious drama can disrupt the narrative flow you've carefully constructed.

Stanley Kubrick’s The Shining (1980)

While the mood can fluctuate based on your character’s successes or lack thereof, ensure a consistency in tone. Take any two scenes and compare them; do they feel like they’re part of the same story? Or do they make such a radical jump that you’re unsure what the tone is meant to be?

Decide on this tone before beginning your script, as it will relate to your theme, and should resonate throughout every scene you write.

10. Enrich Scenes with Sensory and Visual Details

A compelling scene is more than just its setting, characters, and dialogue. It's also about immersing your audience in the world through sensory and visual descriptions. Be judicious with these details – the goal is to enhance, not overwhelm. Think about what your characters might be experiencing through all their senses.

Alejandro González Iñárritu’s The Revenant (2015)

Integrating sensory details can also be a powerful tool for foreshadowing. For instance, if a scene culminates with the revelation of a fire, you might start by subtly introducing the faint scent of smoke earlier on. This not only foreshadows what's to come, but also draws your audience deeper into the scene, making them feel right there with the characters.

11. Master 'Show, Don’t Tell'

'Show, don’t tell' is a fundamental principle in engaging storytelling. For instance, let's say you're introducing Alan, the protagonist's boyfriend. Instead of labeling him as 'needy,' illustrate it through his actions. Maybe he insists on accompanying the protagonist everywhere, subtly revealing his clingy nature. This approach allows the audience to infer Alan's personality traits, making the character more realistic and relatable.

This technique is also effective when combined with foreshadowing. Consider a moment in "The Fellowship of the Ring," when Boromir briefly comes into possession of the One Ring.

The concerned glances from Frodo, Gandalf, and especially Aragorn hint at Boromir's potential temptation. When Boromir returns the ring, claiming indifference, it's not just his words that matter. Aragorn’s reaction, loosening his grip on his sword, subtly foreshadows future conflict. Such nuanced writing creates a complex dynamic without explicitly stating each character's concerns, enhancing the depth and richness of the scene.

12. Evoke Emotional Engagement

To craft a strong scene, we need to ensure the audience is emotionally engaged with the character and events. Audience engagement is often seen as an issue that has more to do with the movie as a whole, rather than within the microcosm of a scene. However, with exceptional writing, you should be capable of evoking empathy and executing an emotional response within a single scene. 

Let’s take a look at Season 1, Episode 9 of Better Call Saul. In this masterclass of writing, a lengthy scene sees various shifts in the dynamic between Jimmy and his brother Chuck.

We’re aware of Jimmy’s moral and ethical indiscretions, and our enjoyment of his escapades is part of the allure of the series. It seems at first like Jimmy and his brother are connecting, though it soon slips and we understand Jimmy is trying to use Chuck to attain his dream job. When Jimmy reveals he knew Chuck went behind his back to prevent him from getting hired, Chuck is backed into a corner and has to confess his true feelings. In this scene, we feel immense empathy for both brothers, whose objectives are contradictory. 

A scene that can have such an emotional impact without declaring one character a victim and the other an aggressor is worth studying.

Practical Tips for Every Scene Writer

Before you’ve even sat down to begin your first scene, it’s important to learn the required skills before your first FADE IN. Ensure you’re knowledgeable in formatting, have a good outline to work from, and that each scene has a pre-established clear objective. These are common tips for writers to learn, whether you’re writing a screenplay, a novel, or a stage production.

Remember, a script is a work in progress, continuously evolving. The same applies to individual scenes. After writing a scene, take a step back and let it simmer for a while. Return to it with fresh eyes for editing and refining. This process of revision is where good writing often becomes great. Revise as many times as needed until the scene feels just right – it's not about reaching perfection but about sculpting your scene to its best possible form.

Conclusion

If you're serious about screenwriting, know that you have the power to create compelling scenes. Establishing a precise setting, creating conflict and tension, developing characters, and balancing exposition and dialogue are key.

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